Sunday, July 20th, 2008

pieces of Pieces of Paul part 4 of... [very extrapolated fregg fanfic]

Title Pieces of Paul, part 4 of ?
Combos:  implied Clive/Graham, and eventually, not yet, Clive/Graham/Paul V.
Rating: PG, due to cussin', innuendo, inadvertent American jive, and peril
Disclaimer: This story is for entertainment purposes only,  the creative endeavor, thoughts, emotions, actions or orientations of any real persons mentioned are totally made up, here. Darned if I know what these persons are concocting for reals, in any case they and/or the production company own, at the least, the title, character names, and scenario.
Word Count: 700ish, this bit.
Summary: early drafts of scenes from Simon and Nick's next movie, "Paul" !?!
Warnings: Probably overdid the Britishisms, consarn it. Please let me know.

As previously mentioned, 

These scenes )
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Tuesday, July 1st, 2008

Pieces of Paul part 3 of...

Title Pieces of Paul, part 3 of ?
Combos:  implied Clive/Graham, and eventually, not yet consarn it, Clive/Graham/Paul V.
Rating: PG, due to cussin', innuendo, inadvertent Americanisms, and peril
Disclaimer: This story is for entertainment purposes only,  the creative endeavor, thoughts, emotions, actions or orientations of any real persons mentioned are totally made up, here. Darned if I know what these persons are concocting for reals, in any case they and/or the production company own, at the least, the title, character names, and scenario.
Summary: early drafts of scenes from Simon and Nick's next movie, "Paul" !?!

Hallo! Again! Fregg_love rs!

As previously mentioned, 

these scenes )

Criticism tempered by a soupcon o mercy is welcome as all get-out.

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Friday, June 27th, 2008

Pieces of Paul part 2 of ....

Title Pieces of Paul, part 2 of ?
Combos:  (eventually! not here tho) Clive/Graham/Paul V.
Rating: PG, due to cussin', grief, and soft toy dismemberment
Disclaimer: This story is for entertainment purposes only,  the creative endeavor, thoughts, emotions, actions or orientations of any real persons mentioned are totally made up, here. Darned if I know what these persons are concocting for reals, in any case they and/or the production company own, at the least, the title, character names, and scenario.
Summary: early drafts of scenes from Simon and Nick's next movie, "Paul" !?!

Hallo! Again! Fregg_love rs!

As previously mentioned,  these scenes were allegedly retrieved from a well-nigh fried laptop brought into a small North London repair shop, and leaked to the internet by the unscrupulous repair technician. Tsk.

Antonio Smith, [1] Forensic Linguist, had to wonder "how likely is it that the sex scenes are the only portions of this script to survive a mac meltdown?"  Suspiciously soon after, these  PG rated bits surfaced, as if in response to this criticism. Hmm. Suspicious!  Smith also comments, "the use of fantasy sequences and visual homage is reminiscent of the sitcom Spaced... However... it seems more likely that Pegg and Frost would take care to avoid devices so characteristic of Pegg's work with Jessica Hynes and Edgar Wright, who are not directly involved in this project. "

A telling analysis, I think.

Judge for yourself? )
Criticism tempered by a soupcon o mercy is welcome as all get-out. xoxox!
(Also, I have an overly long draft of the next bit - anyone care to employ a metaphorical red pencil?)
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Monday, June 23rd, 2008

Pieces of pieces of Paul

Posting a fic to an LJ community and linking from one's own site - or vice versa?  It's a question. This one I'm putting on fregg_love and linking to from here, possibly because I'm less confident of it. Part one of three - probably - it seems to be burgeoning in length.

Summary
: Pre-script instant messages, and early drafts via email, of Nick Frost and Simon Pegg's next movie, "Paul" !?!
Pieces of Paul pt 1

It's a bit odd and scary, and highly presumptuous! Purporting to write in the casual, `at home' voices these two men, Nick Frost and Simon Pegg. Big challenge is conveying what I see as something of a hallmark, the slightly homophobic things they say/do and then how they tend to quickly undermine that - and then vice versa. Ditto to some extent for sexism.

And tricky, interweaving plenty of 

my own somewhat atypical ideas )
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